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Part 6: You Want Me Out? The Apartment Is Mine

<span class="tnbs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 6:</span> You Want Me Out? The Apartment Is Mine


Lila stared at the card, at the little doorway logo, then back at Elise.

“Did you know I would be here tonight?”

“I hoped you would see who he is before you signed anything with him,” Elise said honestly. “I didn’t know if you would. I left the door open. You walked through it. That took courage, even if you didn’t know it.”

Lila’s breath hitched.


“Can I… can I hug you? Is that weird?”

Elise opened her arms.

Lila stepped in, stiff at first, then collapsing, her forehead on Elise’s shoulder, the silver fabric rustling. Elise held her, one hand on the back of her head, the other around her shoulders, the way she had once held friends’ daughters when they cried about boys who weren’t worth it.

Over Lila’s shoulder, Elise saw Victor’s mother being helped to her feet by Victor’s brother. The old woman met Elise’s eyes across the room and mouthed, Thank you.

Elise mouthed back, I love you.

The violins reached the end of their piece and faded, leaving only the soft clink of plates and low voices.

The photographer Victor had hired approached Elise, hesitant, camera hanging at his side.

“Mrs. Moreau,” he said. “I… you paid my deposit. Do you want me to delete the photos of… of what he did? I have everything on the card.”

Elise considered.

“No,” she said after a moment. “Keep the ones where I’m standing. Delete the ones where I’m sitting still. I don’t need pictures of myself waiting to be chosen. I have enough of those.”

He nodded, eyes bright.

“Yes, ma’am.”

Her sister returned with two plates of cake and handed one to Lila, who took it with a watery smile.

The three women stood by the window together, eating cake with small plastic forks, the city glittering beyond the glass, the ballroom warm and noisy and alive behind them.

Later, much later, after the guests had left in clusters, hugging Elise at the door, pressing her hands, whispering, I didn’t know, I’m so sorry, you were magnificent, after the manager had boxed the remaining roses for her to take, after Lila had left with the card safe in her purse and a promise to call, Elise stood alone for a moment beside the long anniversary table.

Her sister was settling the bill at the bar, even though Elise had already paid, just to be sure.

The white rose sat on its plate, untouched.

Elise picked it up.

She had ordered it that afternoon on impulse, after the lawyer had called to confirm the deed was recorded and the notice had been signed, after she had sat in her car outside the bakery and realized she was not afraid.

She held the rose to her nose. It smelled faint and sweet, like nothing and like everything.

Footsteps approached, soft.

Victor’s brother.

He held out a folded coat. Hers.

“You left this on your chair,” he said.

Elise took it.

“Thank you.”


He hesitated, his big hands flexing.

“Elise, the apartment… the money… are you going to be okay?”

Elise looked at him, at the genuine worry in his face, the same face that had clapped.

“I have been okay for a long time,” she said gently. “I just let him tell me I wasn’t.”

He nodded, his eyes filling again.

“If you need anything… if Mom needs anything…”

“I’ll call you,” she promised. “We’re still family. Just… a different shape now.”

He touched her shoulder, brief and respectful, then stepped back to give her space.

Elise slipped her coat on, tucked the deed and the rose into her clutch, and walked toward the doors.

The ballroom was empty now except for the staff stacking chairs and the candles burning low, wax pooling gold on white linen.

At the threshold, she paused and looked back once.

Not at the table where she had been humiliated.

At the window where she had shared cake with two other women who were also learning to read the fine print.



She smiled, small and knowing, the same smile from before, but now it reached her eyes.

Then she pushed the doors open and stepped out into the hallway, into the cool air, into the rest of her life, where every document from this day forward would bear only her name, and she would read every single word before she signed.

Outside, the night was clear.

Her sister waited by the elevator, holding the boxed roses like an offering.

“You ready to go home?” her sister asked.

Elise took her arm.

“Yes,” she said. “Let’s go home.”

PART 7
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