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Part 5: You Want Me Out? The Apartment Is Mine

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 5:</span> You Want Me Out? The Apartment Is Mine

Elise stepped aside.


She did not need to be protected.

Two men in dark suits who had been standing near the bar, who everyone had assumed were restaurant managers, moved forward at the same time.

“Mr. Lang,” one of them said calmly, placing a hand lightly on Victor’s elbow. Not restraining. Guiding. “Let’s not do this in front of your mother.”

Victor jerked away.


“Who are they?” he snapped at Elise, his face mottled red. “Who did you bring? Are you trying to threaten me? This is my anniversary party! I paid for this room!”

“No,” Elise said. “I did.”

She unfolded the paper now and laid it flat on the table beside the fallen sugar rose.

“The ballroom, the catering, the violins, the cake. I paid the invoice yesterday. The manager has the receipt in my name. I knew you wouldn’t check the card statement. You never do.”

The restaurant manager, a woman in a black dress who had been hovering by the kitchen doors, stepped forward and gave a small, confirming nod to the room.

“Mrs. Moreau is correct,” she said quietly. “The event is under her reservation.”

Victor looked around as if the walls themselves had shifted.

Every phone was still recording.


Every face he had invited to watch Elise break was watching him instead.

He tried one last weapon. He always did.

“You think this makes you look strong?” he spat at Elise, his voice dropping, trying to force intimacy, to make it a private fight again. “You think anyone wants a fifty-year-old woman who humiliates her husband in public? You will be alone. No one will touch you after this. Lila is twenty-seven. She—”

“Don’t,” Elise interrupted. It was the first time her voice cracked. Just a hairline fracture. “Don’t you dare use her age as if it’s an achievement. You are fifty-three. You brought a young woman to your wife’s anniversary to watch you discard me like a receipt. That is not youth. That is cruelty. And everyone here sees it now.”

The silence after that was not empty.

It was heavy, ringing.


Victor’s brother stood up.

He was a large man, similar build to Victor, and for twenty-five years he had echoed his younger brother in everything.

He walked around the table, not toward Victor, but toward Elise.

He stopped in front of her.


His eyes were wet.

“Elise,” he said, his voice rough. “I clapped. When he… I clapped. God forgive me, I clapped.”

Elise reached out and touched his forearm.

“You’ve been his brother longer than I’ve been his wife,” she said. “I understand.”

He shook his head, once, hard.

“No. I knew. We all knew what he was. We just liked that he was the one who said it out loud.” He turned to the room. “Put your phones down,” he said suddenly, loudly. “Have some decency. Put them down.”

No one did.

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