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Part 2: The Maid Who Caught the Kick

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 2:</span> The Maid Who Caught the Kick

Naomi had been one of Margaret’s best students.


Then a winter assignment in Philadelphia ended with blood on a hotel carpet and a seventeen-year-old girl sobbing in Naomi’s arms.

Naomi had saved the girl.

She had not been able to save the girl’s father.

She walked away from that life.


She promised herself she would never again use her hands violently unless another person’s life truly depended on it.

Then Vanessa Sterling began spending more and more time at Whitmore House.

Vanessa was engaged to Ethan Whitmore, the thirty-four-year-old heir to Whitmore Development.

She noticed the way Ethan smiled whenever he entered the kitchen.

She noticed that he remembered Naomi’s birthday while forgetting the name of Vanessa’s newest stylist.

She noticed that whenever Naomi spoke, Ethan listened without once glancing down at his phone.

At first, Vanessa allowed her resentment to appear only in small gestures.

She snapped her fingers whenever she wanted Naomi’s attention.


She dropped damp towels across the bedroom floor only minutes after Naomi had finished cleaning it.

Then she turned toward Naomi one afternoon and said:

“You work in this house because Ethan’s family permits you to be here. Don’t start confusing being tolerated with actually belonging.”

Naomi lowered her eyes.

Not because she was submitting.

Because she did not want Vanessa to see the old instinct beginning to rise behind them.


“I never have,” Naomi replied.

That reply disturbed Vanessa far more than shouting ever could have.

The engagement party was scheduled for the first Saturday in December.

Three hundred invited guests.


White roses flown in from California.

Silk tablecloths imported from Italy.

Champagne that cost more than Naomi earned in a week.

To Vanessa, the evening represented far more than an engagement celebration.

It was supposed to be her coronation.

Then she kicked the maid.

And the maid caught her ankle.

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