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Part 2: Locked on a Freezing Balcony at Seven, I Called the Only Number My Mother Saved

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 2:</span> Locked on a Freezing Balcony at Seven, I Called the Only Number My Mother Saved

“I know. I know, baby. I have to get someone moving toward you. I will call right back.”


The line went dead.

I stared at the phone.

For the longest thirty seconds of my life, nothing happened.

Then it rang.


I answered so quickly I nearly dropped it again.

“I’m here,” Grandma said. “Help is coming. I am calling your dad next. I will stay on this phone with you as long as I can.”

I crouched beside the brick wall near the balcony door, exactly where she told me.

“Tell me five things you can see,” she said.

I did not understand why.

“The railing. The neighbor’s light. A tree. The curtains. My feet.”

“Good. Four things you can feel.”

“Cold. The wall. My pajamas. The phone.”


She kept me talking.

Inside, a shadow crossed behind the curtains.

I froze.

The door opened.

Warm air spilled onto the balcony.

Karen stood there, her face tight with anger.


“Who are you talking to?”

I clutched the phone to my chest.

Grandma’s voice was still audible through the speaker.

“Do not take that phone from her.”


Karen’s expression changed.

“Is that your grandmother?”

I did not answer.

She stepped onto the balcony.

“Give me the phone.”

I backed against the wall.

“No.”

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