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Part 2: You Can Leave. But He Stays

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 2:</span> You Can Leave. But He Stays

“You read them?”


“Some.”

“And the others?”

She lowered her head.

“I trusted my husband.”


Later she found out the townhouse was under Derek’s name. The one I bought for $418,000. The one I put solely in her name so nobody could take it from her.

Her bank account? Empty. Eighty-six thousand dollars gone.

“Where have you been sleeping?”

She didn’t answer.

“Gaby.”

“A shelter. And before that… sometimes near the old Greyhound station.”

I turned around so fast my seatbelt caught.

“You slept outside with my grandson?”


Her face crumpled.

“I was scared. Derek said if I left, he’d keep Leo. Brenda told me she knew people at Child Protective Services. People in family court. She said if I made trouble, they’d tell everyone I was unstable.”

I took her to a motel that night.

At eight-thirty, someone knocked on the door.

Three firm knocks.

Gaby’s body went rigid.


I opened the door with the chain still on.

A man stood outside. Young. Broad-shouldered.

“Mr. Whitaker. I’m here on behalf of Derek Miller. He wants his wife home tomorrow.”

I closed the door.


Then my phone buzzed.

Unknown number.

The message made my blood run cold:

*I’ve worked for the Miller family for three years. They owe me $180,000 and they’re refusing to pay. If you want to know what they’re planning to do to your daughter, tomorrow at 9. Come alone.*

But that wasn’t the worst part.

At 12:17 a.m., someone sent Gaby a photograph.

It showed her outside the shelter weeks earlier. Leo in her arms.

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