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Part 9: My Son Promised Eighteen Relatives My New Home Before Asking Me

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 9:</span> My Son Promised Eighteen Relatives My New Home Before Asking Me

He rubbed both hands over his face.


“Elena said her mom would never invite people to stay at someone else’s house without asking. Then she looked at me like I had lost my mind.”

I sat in the porch chair beside him.

“Had you?”

“Maybe temporarily.”


I smiled despite myself.

His apology, when it came, was awkward and incomplete.

“I should have asked.”

I waited.

He looked at me.

“And I should not have told them you were excited when I had not even talked to you.”

I waited again.

He sighed.


“And I should have congratulated you before turning your house into a solution.”

“Yes.”

“You could make this easier.”

There was the old Julian, trying one last door.

“I could,” I said. “I am choosing not to.”

To my surprise, he nodded.


Saturday arrived bright and cold.

I knew Elena’s family had reached Boulder because Elena sent one message: “Everyone made it. Hotel chaos, but alive.”

I replied with a smiling face, then spent the morning hanging pictures.

At noon, the doorbell rang.


I opened it to find Elena alone, holding a paper bag.

“I asked before coming,” she said.

“You did.”

“May I come in?”

I stepped aside.

The bag contained a loaf of bread, a jar of preserves her mother had made, and a small potted rosemary plant.

“My mom wanted you to have these,” Elena said. “She also wants you to know she is mortified.”

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