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Part 23: My Daughter’s Father-in-Law Rented Out My Idaho Lake House—Without My Permission

<span class="fs-story-title-part-prefix">Part 23:</span> My Daughter’s Father-in-Law Rented Out My Idaho Lake House—Without My Permission

She held it against her chest.


“Thank you, Mom.”

I nodded.

On the morning I finally handed Alan the keys, the sky over Lake Pend Oreille was clear.

The house was empty.


My furniture had been moved.

The kitchen cupboards were bare.

I walked through each room one last time.

Then I stepped onto the deck.

The lake stretched out beneath the mountains, blue and quiet.

I remembered Thomas standing beside me on the first morning we owned the place.

He’d brought two cups of coffee outside and said we should buy a boat.

We never bought one.


Instead, we spent twenty-three years watching other people’s boats cross the water.

I smiled at the memory.

Then I heard footsteps behind me.

Alan stood in the doorway.

“Take your time,” he said.

I shook my head.


“I’m ready.”

We walked toward the front entrance.

I turned the lock and checked it once.

Then I placed the keys in his hand.


Alan looked toward the lake.

“I think my grandchildren are going to love it here.”

I smiled.

“I hope they do.”

He thanked me.

Then he stepped inside.

I walked down the porch steps toward my car.

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